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I just got back from my previous blog http://exuberanto.blogspot.com, and read this old post.
It was my post about the happiness that I felt when I was one of the nomination for best essay task and i found myself in tears!
I just remembered how sad it was to found out that I had not read well and I got yelled by one of my classmates for my inaccurate to read Chinese characters (Hanzi) but it also the happiest moment to find out who were support me in bad times (thanks to my friends!).
Now that was the sweet memory in my university life when I found I've graduated from Chinese Language and Culture major and I got my Bachelor Degree :D
So here's my old post! Enjoy B-)
YEAAAAHH!! HAHA
FINALLY AFTER A LONG TIME, I GOT THE NOMINATIONS FOR THE BEST ESSAY IN MY WRITING CLASS!!! MUAHAHA
actually I already attended the Chinese Writing Class since my second year and for my third year I got the nominations for the best essay in my class!! FINALLY MUAHAHA :D *evil laugh*
There are 5 persons who got the chance to read the essay in front of the class as the best essay : Deborah (吴梦琳), Efah (郭玫姿), Me (张丽苹), Verawati (陈素妮), Sisca (黄柔嘉）
I was the third :p so, here's the essay that I made :D
狗
张丽苹
狗是一种驯养繁殖的哺乳动物，狼是狗的祖先，来自东亚。松狮犬、沙皮犬、秋田犬、柴犬、Basenji犬是世界上最老的犬种。有个理论说狗起源于亚洲，可能是对的，因为14种古老犬种，大部分是起源于中国和日本。
科学家说狗继承狼的猎取能力，但是狗比狼比较沟通像人们一样。狗会被受训，跟我们一起玩儿、住在一起，也会跟人们和别的狗沟通。有许多电影、故事、书可以证明狗的忠实和忠心，比如《Hachiko》 (日本)、《Hearty Paws》(韩国)、 《10 Promises to My Dog》（日本）等等。
大多数狗还有狼的物理特性，比如锋利的牙齿，坚强的牙关。它们有那样的牙齿和牙关都为了攻击、咬和撕裂食物。狗也有强壮的肌肉、团结的踝骨、心血管系统，这些可以支持狗身体的耐力和运行速度，以及捕捉和撕裂猎物。
狗能听到低频的声音从16赫兹至70 KHz（人们只能听到20赫兹至20 Khz的频率），但是狗没有猫听力好。狗确定声源的能力比人类更快，并且可以听到四倍更远的声音。狗的嗅觉能力比人类更好。狗有220亿个对气味敏感的嗅觉细胞，而人们只有5亿个嗅觉细胞。
现世界上大概有85多个犬种，分成4组：第一组是非洲和亚洲的狗，比如： 阿富汗猎犬、秋田犬、阿拉斯加雪橇犬、西施犬、西伯利亚雪橇犬等等；第二组是獒的犬形，比如：伯恩山犬、斗牛犬、罗威犬等等；第三组是牧羊犬，比如：德国牧羊犬、圣伯纳犬、威尔士柯基犬等等；第四组是现代狩猎的犬型，比如：博美犬、金毛寻回犬、腊肠犬等等。
狗仗人势，如果我们用心地驯养它们，它们就会成为友好的狗。可是如果我们驯养的方式不当或者不正确，那么它们就会成 为不友好的獒犬。狗是真正友谊的标志，是真正忠实的朋友，连人们也不会有那么像狗一样忠实的爱。
（2014年9月4日）
（2014年9月4日）
The Comments :
Translation
1. The Lecture's Comment (the red ink) :
"The essay is using the Compare Description,Category Description, Numeral Description Methods.The essay was written in detail about dog's characteristic, features, the breeds, etc. Very great! I hope the essay for the next time could have more words."
2. From me (the grey ink):
"The lecture told me that my essay was great, using three methods for the description essay. I asked to read the essay in front of my classmates, but I read it so badly :(
3. From Efah and Sisca (the grey ink):
"Semangat Obi!"
”Obi Fighting!/Cheer Up Obi!"
After I finish read the essay in front of the class, I heard Vonny was Cheer Up Me too! She said : "张丽苹加油!" (Fighting!)
wuaaaahhh, I will cheer up and practice more!
thank you for your encourage!
God Bless You all :D
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